For us to meet our deadline this Friday 10th, 5pm:
- Get our title sequence to match our opening thriller,
- ensure that are title sequence is edited to the best of our ability
- To post progression on our blogs
- To make our edit flow well with titles
Max, Ashleigh, Nicole
ReplyDeleteAs the video has not been uploaded by the rough cut deadline for assessment I am unable to give you directed feedback or a grade beyond L1 for the video as it is incomplete.
However micro aspects you have done well:
Generally well framed shots and a variety of angles - excellent final sequence (L4)
Steady and smooth movements (L4)
Good use of mise-en-scene with attention to detail (L4)
location/costume
Narrative makes some sense (L4)
Confident performance
Clearly identifies the genre (L4)
Improvements
Title sequence is incomplete (no titles!) (L1)
No soundtrack or foley (L1)
Colour correction is a subtle art - don't make skin too green, try using blue (L4)
Use overlays to balance the lighting levels (L4)
Hit the final deadline (Fri 2nd March 5pm) (L1)